1. My gut is telling me you get off on the attention you get here.
2. The video sucks. Totally uninterested in whatever the fuck that dude had to say.
3. I don't know how to fix it. Not my wheelhouse.
4. Go somewhere else if you're genuinely interested in how to make good videos. This is NOT the place that is going to offer you the best help. (Assuming point 1 is wrong.)